Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Assignment #3

Option Three: Write one paragraph about a time when you felt uncomfortable or out of place. Where were you? Who were you with? Why did you feel so out of place? What did you learn about yourself as a result? Be sure you include a topic sentence, specific examples that support your topic sentence, and a final concluding sentence that wraps up your ideas.
I felt uncomfortable when I just started playing Softball. It was my first year playing for Edina the reason why I felt uncomfortable was because I didn't know how to play softball. The girls that were in the team had all ready been practicing on their own or with other members of the team or they played when they were little, for me it was the first year and i didn't have a clue in what to do. Smiles was one of the girls that taught me the basics skills, she helpped me a lot even when she new that i sucked at it. I felt left out when I was with the other team members. What I learn about my self is that even when i felt uncomfortable i didn't let my self down when i was really bad at playing softball. After that Im still really shy to open with other people.